Something is gradually decreasing.. something that makes me feel lively…
Something that can’t be described in words… they are my silent whispers…
My silent whispers which says I want to live with u forever..
My whispers that tells me I can’t love anyone now the way I loved u…
My whispers that still makes me sometime feel that somebody is mine…
My whispers that hurts me more than anything else in this world..
But I don’t now a days listens to my whispers… As I have a life time responsibility to complete..
The responsibility of a smooth transition of urs from my life…
The responsibility of making u believe that u can forget me…
The responsibility of filling your life full of happiness …
The responsibility of making u forget me like the Dry Rose…
I know it’s a huge responsibility… and I know there are so many other things that I missed in this..But you should be assured that I remember every tiny bits of everything…. And for that worth so many life things.. I know I can sail through it…
Monday, February 2, 2009
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The way you write these lines,(I don't know whether technically it can be called a poem or not..sorry for my ignorance) encourages me to write poems /stuffs without considering about the rhyming.
ReplyDeleteNeedless to say a very well written..appreciate the way you have put words to your feelings.
bhaaai....ye to fiction ho hi nahi sakti....jo bhi hai.....bahut bada durbhagya hai ki u r not together....beautifuly presented...
ReplyDeletebhai.... ab is sein jo bhi kahooo.... fiction or realistic... it is now just memories... moments of togetherness .. and moments of loneliness....
ReplyDeletesabaas...u accept :)
ReplyDeleteI think I liked the bakwaas, sadi hui, romantic flicks of urs, than these sad n depressing, realistic-yet-beautiful lines.
ReplyDeleteCheer Up Buddy!
Look at the positive side of things n stop worrying bout the past.
"Kya tha tera jo tune kho diya....
khali haath aaya tha, khali haath jayega!"
kisi ne to kaha tha yeh, bhool gayi kisne. :P
:D
Keep Smiling n keep writing!
I am there to comment u (Don't expect a compliment, puhhhleeeeezzz!)