Monday, February 2, 2009

Silent whispers.....

Something is gradually decreasing.. something that makes me feel lively…
Something that can’t be described in words… they are my silent whispers…
My silent whispers which says I want to live with u forever..
My whispers that tells me I can’t love anyone now the way I loved u…
My whispers that still makes me sometime feel that somebody is mine…
My whispers that hurts me more than anything else in this world..
But I don’t now a days listens to my whispers… As I have a life time responsibility to complete..

The responsibility of a smooth transition of urs from my life…
The responsibility of making u believe that u can forget me…
The responsibility of filling your life full of happiness …
The responsibility of making u forget me like the Dry Rose…

I know it’s a huge responsibility… and I know there are so many other things that I missed in this..But you should be assured that I remember every tiny bits of everything…. And for that worth so many life things.. I know I can sail through it…

5 comments:

  1. The way you write these lines,(I don't know whether technically it can be called a poem or not..sorry for my ignorance) encourages me to write poems /stuffs without considering about the rhyming.

    Needless to say a very well written..appreciate the way you have put words to your feelings.

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  2. bhaaai....ye to fiction ho hi nahi sakti....jo bhi hai.....bahut bada durbhagya hai ki u r not together....beautifuly presented...

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  3. bhai.... ab is sein jo bhi kahooo.... fiction or realistic... it is now just memories... moments of togetherness .. and moments of loneliness....

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  4. I think I liked the bakwaas, sadi hui, romantic flicks of urs, than these sad n depressing, realistic-yet-beautiful lines.
    Cheer Up Buddy!
    Look at the positive side of things n stop worrying bout the past.

    "Kya tha tera jo tune kho diya....
    khali haath aaya tha, khali haath jayega!"

    kisi ne to kaha tha yeh, bhool gayi kisne. :P
    :D
    Keep Smiling n keep writing!
    I am there to comment u (Don't expect a compliment, puhhhleeeeezzz!)

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